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Ach, ouuu, sorry for any delay in art submissions. I've been working on some thingsssss, such as the SB animation (goshhhh I'm taking so long with it lol). I was hoping to start submitting IO every week but I have had absolutely NO time to work on the next page at all.

I would've had this done a few hours ago but I had to stay late at work to help with a c-section :'DDDD -warmed newborn poopies and helped them breathe-

I like how this turned out and I was still adding details, but when I finished with the highlights I was scared that if I added much more it'd be a bit much.

1. All my art looks the saaaaaayme -crai-
2. wtf is with my obsession with backlighting?!
3. I hope you likes it, Sterf <3 and Kale, too.
4. This was a wajas commission for ~stealthferret.

Characters (c) ~stealthferret and Kallle (whom I don't think has a dA)
Art (c) me

Please do not use this image unless you are the recipient.

UUUUUU

PS

*Unknown-person has like the most inspirational flashes EVER -thumbsup-

AHHHH

Critiques; TO WORK ON..
1. Detailed anatomy // differences between animals

Critiques


:icondesertfox04:
I love the softness of the background. It's absolutely warm and perfect; it fits the mood beautifully. You executed the character interaction spot on. I like how you managed both the perspective of the trail and the hills. I'm still in awe over the warm feeling you get from it.

The canine's anatomy is well done on the front half. The ears look good for the view they're put in. I can't really say anything about the ferret (I think that's what it is. Assuming it is 'cause of the user's name) anatomy 'cause...I don't draw ferrets.

The only thing that threw me off would be the hind end of the dog. Both of his back legs are up in the air, but it's obvious he's walking. The closest back leg looks fine, it's the farthest back leg. Given the way the leg is stretched out, the foot part wouldn't be bending back in. Plus, the hock is a bit too pointed and it thins out oddly before hitting the foot. Had it been on the ground, it would have been perfect. It's still a stunning image; the hind end just throws me off.

Also, the tail tapers a little too suddenly, but I'm thinking it may be because you ran out of canvas? But, that's just being nitpick-y.

But overall, a very nice, beautiful, stunning image. :)
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What I love about this here is your dealing with color and shadow. I love how your characters vividly stand out against the background, and how the background itself is nice and subtle, giving all the more emphasis to your characters. The overall choice of colors and the soft shadows give out a feeling of warmth, serenity, happiness, love and tenderness, and you just can't help but smile as you're looking at this. The texture of the fur and the grass is a nice touch, too. You really feel like you can reach out and touch it all with your own hands.
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:iconkorbexo:
Aww floppy ears! This is great. ^.^

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I LOVE THE LIGHTNING MOOD SO MUCH IN THIS so nice.. and peaceful for some reason, I love both their expressions, such a nice scene here <3
The only thing that I see weirddd is the back legs of the dog, looks like if he was jumping or something instead of walking carefuly for his friend not to fall? sjdkgn idk ENYWAYS I really like this. vry much :thumbsup:

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:iconneikoish:
LOL YES I knew they were wrong and just didn't fix it dfjklgdg WHY ME WHY

plus they're kind of thin

Thank you though :)

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ART IS ART. Stop being so fricking picky.

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"You might wanna add some chicken soup - it's just as useless, but it's got chicken." -House
:iconstealthferret:
Ahhhh! Omg! I love this so much you have no idea how awesome you are! <3<3<3
:iconjustlikesoup:
What's with the new critique thing? Oh well... I can't really find anything here to critique. The lighting is fabulous and I don't know enough about animal anatomy to spy anything off there. The background seems a little overly-simplified, but then again that's not exactly the main focus of the picture. That little one is adorable...

I don't think your art all looks the same, but do know that feeling all too well. Maybe try some simple (or detailed, if you'd prefer) drawing exercises like vastly differing breeds (sight hounds, hound-hounds, and toy/compact dogs would be good since their body structures differ so much), similar breeds (like malamutes and huskies) so that you can focus on the little things that make them different, or even just trying out different styles. Things like that...

Oh, and sorry for not commenting in forever. I just can't seem to think of anything to say anymore... except now... Sorry for the horribly long comment, too. =P

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:iconneikoish:
It's not necessarily the subject of my art that seems tiresome to me really, just.. I dunno, maybe the settings all seem the same. I should try to do some different scenes, I guess, or yeah, doing something more simple would be good methinks.

Thank you! <3 we should rolllleplayyyyy~

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:iconjustlikesoup:
That's understandable, I guess I just tire of my subjects more than anything else. Maybe try making landscape speedpaints or play around with lighting, in that case. It's really fun to play around with funky colors while shading.

Ffff, we should. I was just drawing Bejel, too. =P Damn canine anatomy is tricky.

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:iconakpaley:
What type of waja is this...?
I assume it's a wajas commission...

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